reikiba's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Brawl Taunts]

nice

good humor

[Morpher 2]

better than morpher 1

Turning into all Newgrounds characters was nice. Not as random as Morpher 1. However, the pace is too fast. Morpher needs to stay in each shape a bit longer. Changing colors would also be nice.

Firetalon responds:

I kept it in black to accent the movement. and also, i had a person say that it should faster, so i guess i cant please everybody. I am working on a color animation though, so look for that.

[[KK] Vaporeon]

?????

The opening was kinda good but then you did that stupid animation loop. The loop makes no sense, but even if it did, short loops like that don't look impressive at all.

If you honestly want to make higher scores, learn to animate a figure. At least break apart a character into pieces so you can move around each limb. Even sprite animation would work.

Although, just being a [KK] member is likely to always drag your score down, so you might want to distance yourself from them.

SAK responds:

haha no

[Mad Sync]

good

For the lip sync, his entire jaw line should slant rather than bend. Structurally, the jaw swings down from a point just in front of the ear, so his bottom lip would seem to receed when he opens his mouth instead of jut out.

His arms move ambiguously--slowly and without purpose. If you don't have time to animate them correctly, it would have been better to leave them by his side. It just becomes distracting. If you want to get the arm movements right, you should pretend you're singing the song and pay attention to your hand movements.

To make it even more realistic, he would sway his whole body to the song, even if it's only slightly. He'd probably also close his eyes when he's extending a note. You should study videos of some professional performers for a better idea of how they move during different tones of the song.

It's good to do more than your teacher expects.

[My Sakura Fanart]

it's okay

You should get a drawing book that breaks down the human form. And learning proper proportioning goes a long way in improving your art.

It looks like you're better with the chibi style than anything else.

[Morpher]

stylish

Looks good. You should leave some of the forms on the screen longer. Rather than having it morph into objects randomly, try to make the transformations more progressively related.

If the morpher's supposed to be a creature, it should be responding to it's environment. It at least needs objects to respond to, so it has a reason to change shape. Or, it could be responding to music or sound.

Firetalon responds:

I know. After finishing, I thought about those things. I'm already working on another one for the future and so I will use this.

[First Flash Short]

good for starting

Movement looks a bit wobbly (probably framerate is too low), but overall good. Needs sound fx mostly.

Spoil-SK responds:

yeah may be i can do something to improve it ...thx :)

[[KK] Doctor Faggot Ep.3]

blah

Not very interesting. The voices are annoying and the humor is non-existent. You should follow CascadeAgent's advice.

[[KK] Cant touch this]

no effort

Just a vibrating photo with MC Hammer song playing. Nothing that requires skill.

Steff responds:

I doubt you can make anything better.

[Sasukes Day Of]

its a start

Needs sound effects for one thing. Background music would help alot too.

There also doesn't seem to be a point to him being out there. I don't feel any story going on. It doesn't necessarily have to be a fight, but there has to be some reason for what's going on. It just looks like he's attacking air and running in random directions.

And it's a good idea not to loop the animation. It should have a definite end--unless you have a specific reason for looping. So, add a start button or preloader.