reikiba's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[testest]

Pretty cool

Good animating. The mouth test was humorous and the move test was cool and well-paced.

For the interface you might want to give better directions. I tried to click the arrows several times before I tried the arrow keys.

holyforks responds:

Cant believe I forgot to write about that. Thank you

[Lucid GypsyCat]

Huh?

Not really good at all. The photo-realistic cat doesn't go with the minimalistic background--better to draw the cat or use a photo for the background. Even then, the background isn't very interesting to look at.

[The Bear Necessities]

Bears eating starfish?

Needs a story. If you were trying to be funny, it didn't work. It just looked weird.

[The Go On Collab!]

Well, that was very wierd

But tandem stories can turn out that way.

The animation was fair. It kept the action flowing. I just prefer a more coherent story.

[What Would You Do??]

okay

It was good animating and good effort, but I didn't find it particularly funny--tho the last sponge joke made me smile. The humor just seemed immature.

funymony responds:

Haha, it's hard to come up with "WHAT WOULD YOU DO _______?" line.
A lot of the lines contained an animal bursting into the room and punching you in the face.

[Very Rough Lifting Anim]

nice animating skill

But really, Newgrounds isn't meant to be a place to post incomplete works--although I still see it done. The TOS says no works-in-progress--if I remember correctly.

Actually, you should look up the "Kanook" animation. It's recent to Newgrounds. Over half of it is still in pencil test like yours, but it's pretty long and has great animation--has a Disney feel to the artwork. The beginning has color and looks very professional. I suggest it because the author wants to put together a collab, and your style looks like a perfect fit--if you want.

Your animation is very good, but your guy needs to lift with his back or he'll pull a muscle. High marks this time, but I look around Newgrounds for finished works.

curtiSmith responds:

I'll be uploading a full music video to Newgrounds in the next week, just wanted to try submitting something simple beforehand. Thanks for the feedback and the tips.

[[KK] Cirno Caused 9/11]

it's just spam

Needs animation, creativity, and effort.

Chewy2007 responds:

This is a work of art and you'll take back your words RIGHT NOW BUSTER >:(

[[KK] Butter War Part 2]

Bad

I recently saw a flash by [KK] using some of these same graphics that almost looked decent because it had animation. Then I see this sad step backwards.

[Metal Gear Brotha]

Nice

The gag was pulled off well enough, but kinda short.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

It was short, but I'm still glad it didn't ruin it.

[[KK] Ben Gunn in Space]

Lame

Seventh time I've seen you post this guy with the same song on a different background.