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What?

I don't get it. Even after reading your summary, the story makes no sense, so I can't bring myself to care about the characters, which look silly.

Pretty cool

Good animating. The mouth test was humorous and the move test was cool and well-paced.

For the interface you might want to give better directions. I tried to click the arrows several times before I tried the arrow keys.

holyforks responds:

Cant believe I forgot to write about that. Thank you

Huh?

Not really good at all. The photo-realistic cat doesn't go with the minimalistic background--better to draw the cat or use a photo for the background. Even then, the background isn't very interesting to look at.

Bears eating starfish?

Needs a story. If you were trying to be funny, it didn't work. It just looked weird.

Well, that was very wierd

But tandem stories can turn out that way.

The animation was fair. It kept the action flowing. I just prefer a more coherent story.

okay

It was good animating and good effort, but I didn't find it particularly funny--tho the last sponge joke made me smile. The humor just seemed immature.

funymony responds:

Haha, it's hard to come up with "WHAT WOULD YOU DO _______?" line.
A lot of the lines contained an animal bursting into the room and punching you in the face.

nice animating skill

But really, Newgrounds isn't meant to be a place to post incomplete works--although I still see it done. The TOS says no works-in-progress--if I remember correctly.

Actually, you should look up the "Kanook" animation. It's recent to Newgrounds. Over half of it is still in pencil test like yours, but it's pretty long and has great animation--has a Disney feel to the artwork. The beginning has color and looks very professional. I suggest it because the author wants to put together a collab, and your style looks like a perfect fit--if you want.

Your animation is very good, but your guy needs to lift with his back or he'll pull a muscle. High marks this time, but I look around Newgrounds for finished works.

curtiSmith responds:

I'll be uploading a full music video to Newgrounds in the next week, just wanted to try submitting something simple beforehand. Thanks for the feedback and the tips.

it's just spam

Needs animation, creativity, and effort.

Chewy2007 responds:

This is a work of art and you'll take back your words RIGHT NOW BUSTER >:(

Bad

I recently saw a flash by [KK] using some of these same graphics that almost looked decent because it had animation. Then I see this sad step backwards.

Nice

The gag was pulled off well enough, but kinda short.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

It was short, but I'm still glad it didn't ruin it.

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