At least there's animation
JK and SAK were kinda good. The modulated voice is hard to understand sometimes. Lolimaster didn't make any sense. Giving yourself good reviews is lame.
It's a vast improvement for [KK].
At least there's animation
JK and SAK were kinda good. The modulated voice is hard to understand sometimes. Lolimaster didn't make any sense. Giving yourself good reviews is lame.
It's a vast improvement for [KK].
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! You're not suppose to understand the Beast Snacks yet, however as the story unfolds, the confusion will be laid to rest, hope to see you back for Episode 2!
-Taco Buttfish.
Are they like gremlins or something
It's well-made and feels like a silent film.
You need to have a start and stop button.
Wow
You're incredibly good. With animation and story. You definitely need to finish this and make more.
Thanks again rekiba!
You desrve your own studio
That was some of the best animating I've seen on Newgrounds! You should apply for work at Disney. Right now.
The colored part at the beginning looked very professional, and the rest of the blocking looks great. I'd really like to see it finished.
Even in it's incomplete state, you deserve a 10.
Wow, thanks Reikiba! I'm glad you liked it and wrote a review!
I actually am applying to Disney!! I'm nervously waiting to hear back ... as well as applying to other studios ... I have a lot of different plans/ideas I'm throwing around ... (you can read about them here:http://larkinheather.newgrounds.
com/news/post/481563). (Oh, and I want my own studio ... someday ...) Thanks for all the great encouragement!!!
Cute
It'd help if you stop the animation at the end and add a play button. Otherwise, it's hard to tell when the song ends. All Flash animations should have start and stop capability.
It's very bright and cheery. And everything goes with the song.
Not bad
Ambitious piece. I like music video pieces, but the animation just didn't seem to flow well to me, and the message wasn't quite clear.
*see below* :)
It was good
The sound could have been better. As could the story. I have no idea what the beast snacks were.
But the overall presentation was well put-together.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! You're not suppose to understand the Beast Snacks yet, however as the story unfolds, the confusion will be laid to rest, hope to see you back for Episode 2!
-Taco Buttfish.
Still underdeveloped
I get the joke, even though I'm not sure who they are supposed to be, if anyone. It's good for a start. It just seemed like there could have been alot more to add to the punchline--like better comedic timing.
The music keeps playing at the end when it doesn't have to. You could add credits or something to the end and then stop or fade the music right after.
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