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[[KK] Ben Gunn in New York]

Uncreative

Try animating something... something good... please. All you did was resubmit this song with a different image under a different name.

robotuzi1 responds:

Ben Gunn is in new york in this one. It's not the same.

[[KK] Ben Gunn in Tokyo]

Nothing

Try animating something... something good... please.

[Out of Heaven: Trailer]

Really good

I started watching without reading the comments. At first, I was like: "Why does the guy look like Neji and the girl look like Ten-Ten?" Then I got to the part where it was naming the rest of the cast and I went, "Oh." Then I read your comments.

Really well done. I could easily recognize every character. Transitions were good and I like the noir style. The opening, I think, was darker than it needed to be (the purple could have been brighter against the black, for example). Dramatic doesn't necessarily mean dark-as-possible. I think greater contrast would help.

Toboe-LoneWolf responds:

Thanks! Yeah, I know I have some constrast issues but the laptop that I use to work on this Flash has an insanely bright monitor that...even when messing with the settings I can't really tell how well the color contrast works. :/ Thus, the slight message at the beginning of the flash.

One day, in the few future, I will have a new desktop with a decent monitor and everything will work. XD

[Kung Fool]

Good

It's a nice change from sprite fights. And it's well made.

Don't overdo the same gag so much. Combining 2 or more gags you've already done doesn't necessarily make it a new gag.

[Red Bull Short]

It was okay

It was well, animated and it made me smile.

[Sleeping beauty yaoi]

Good is good

The art and animation are excellent. The gayness is irrelevant.

[[KK] Mutated Pokemon 3]

At least you animated something

The game really is pointless. The animation was slightly less so. One point is for the menu system and sound, one because animation is present.

I wish I had something more helpful to say.

[Naruto Flash 5]

cute

It was interesting to watch. Could use better lip sync and character movement. Art could be better, but IMO, if you animate the characters well, the quality of your artwork becomes less relevant.

[Freerun]

Really good

The animation is really good, even if the senario doesn't make a whole lot of sense. I mean, does everyone in the city just hate him and try to kill him or arrest him on sight? And, a convenient movable grate in his jail cell?

Nice action, tho.

To give it a meaningful story, you could make him escaping a city full of vampires or zombies or something like that.

[I Dream In Retro]

That's a crazy interesting dream

Would make a better game, tho.