Wow
You're incredibly good. With animation and story. You definitely need to finish this and make more.
Wow
You're incredibly good. With animation and story. You definitely need to finish this and make more.
Thanks again rekiba!
You desrve your own studio
That was some of the best animating I've seen on Newgrounds! You should apply for work at Disney. Right now.
The colored part at the beginning looked very professional, and the rest of the blocking looks great. I'd really like to see it finished.
Even in it's incomplete state, you deserve a 10.
Wow, thanks Reikiba! I'm glad you liked it and wrote a review!
I actually am applying to Disney!! I'm nervously waiting to hear back ... as well as applying to other studios ... I have a lot of different plans/ideas I'm throwing around ... (you can read about them here:http://larkinheather.newgrounds.
com/news/post/481563). (Oh, and I want my own studio ... someday ...) Thanks for all the great encouragement!!!
Personally, I don't like the song
Toward the end, it says, "Missing Part" for quite a while. Don't know if that was intentional or not.
It's just okay to me. Timing and transitions were good. Some kind of animation would help. Just using a banana and a phone over and over seemed more monotonous than whimsical. Having someone talking on a banana phone would be better--or some kind of skit with people using banana phones.
i was lazy to animate...so i made missing parts
Boring
He needs to move faster if he's rockin', and his arms at least need to move if he's playing a guitar. Making him dance would greatly help. A music video needs to have allot of movement.
Needs start and stop functions.
I don't even need to try to succeed.
Not bad
Ambitious piece. I like music video pieces, but the animation just didn't seem to flow well to me, and the message wasn't quite clear.
*see below* :)
It was good
The sound could have been better. As could the story. I have no idea what the beast snacks were.
But the overall presentation was well put-together.
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! You're not suppose to understand the Beast Snacks yet, however as the story unfolds, the confusion will be laid to rest, hope to see you back for Episode 2!
-Taco Buttfish.
Short but good
Well-animated. You could have drawn this gag out more, I think, and made it funnier.
if i had done that. wouldn't it have felt more drawn out?
Not bad
I saw the second episode and had to watch the first. The way you present everything is great. Your animating could be better, but you get the point across.
Thanks :D
Kinda interesting
Too short. Had good transitions. Didn't understand what the sparkly effect was for after he stabbed the dragon.
Needs a start and stop button.
THANKS!!
Could hardly understand anyone
I didn't understand most of what was said and there was no interesting action.
terrible review
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