reikiba's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Girlshan in Paradise Ep4.]

Huh?

If you're going to make fun of Girlchan in Paradise, please, at least put some effort into it. Your animation has neither good art nor good sound.

Make a good animation and get a good review....

[HAPPYCAT]

Interesting

It's kinda cute but at the same time I'm kind weirded out. If it's supposed to be telling a story, the animation could be better planned out. It just seems like a bunch of randomness.

Since it cuts short, I'm assuming this is a work-in-progress. It's a good starting point.

One thing your animation could definitely use are stop and play buttons. As I'm writing this review, I have to listen to this song fragment over and over.

[Queens Bite]

Good animation but confusing

I really like the style. The art is good and the scene set up is great. But I don't understand what's going on. It looks like the old guy just wanders off the edge, and he doesn't seem at all disturbed by the moving man-eating plant.

From a post below, I saw that the guy is supposed to be feeding it. It doesn't seem like it, though.

The-Evil-Bunny responds:

yeah should have let him take more his time to get her attention or something. oh well better next time ^^
i'll make a more clear scenario in my next short. but that's for next year =p

[Vigilance 2-D.I.E. series]

I like the overall feel

The voices were poor quality. I had to play the animation again and turn up the speakers to hear what anyone was saying, and even then I couldn't catch everything. Try buying a better microphone.

Was the hero spacing out or having a flashback or something? I couldn't tell what was going on in the very beginning. It wasn't really clear.

cris17 responds:

its not supposed to be clear right off the bat lol